Development pages for Untitled Crime/Neo-Noir project. Scripted and Lettered.

As mentioned in my previous post, these pages started to coalesce into a "thing" in my head. Those of you that follow me know I've been threatening my own projects for a while now, and the road to that includes boning up on some skills beyond drawing. Not just writing, but lettering, and eventually pre-press.
So, I looked at these pages that I had so much fun drawing and said "F*ck it!" Scripted them on the fly and then set about seeing how my lettering skills fare.
For better or worse, this is the first thing that the public has seen that I've written, drawn, scripted, and lettered. I'm still growing, and learning, but I'm pretty stoked on this first effort and I hope you are as well! Constructive feedback will be appreciated!
Anyway, enjoy!